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Writing Quality 2.5 - readable but need an editor/proofreader Stability of updates 3 - posted december 27th as of now 19 chapters which is slow, but its a fanfic so average rating Story Development 4- is great, i like it very much Character Design 3- should have rated it higher but as of now there are only 2 original characters mc and pokemon. good thing though as author is trying to keep away from writing about canon characters. World background 4 - its the pokeman world, with a twist and for me a good twist by the author. gripe i have with this is that i dont really like to read about depressed mc's that much so i am hoping that the depression will get solved in the future. as of now there aint that much battles the bread and butter of pokemon, and pacing seems slow but still liking it, also grammar needs to be touched up. i like the charm it has, makes it feel very pokemon with friendship and family and such i like the system very much, not very powerful at the start, but has immense game breaking potential which is a plus, makes it feel like youre growing along with the mc and his pokemon makes for a nice daydream like immersion. i maybe biased on my review on this even if my rating for this is slow, its a novel im looking forward to. low rating is there because i dont give perfect scores everytime i review... try to be realistic here. you may like something, but dont be blind to its flaws.

Hello yes I'm ur first(review) now bend down lol jk jk. I realised after reading chapter 2 and seeing the deep feelings the trainer had that there will be a lot of development to come and that the author built a solid foundation for a good story. i hope he/she has it all planned out wish u the best of luck. Please keep the schedule constant if u can't do every day then say, every 3 days or once a week as long as u keep us in the loop u won't loose readers and have a loyal fan-base Thanks for taking the time to write this story p.s. i only know 1 good pokemon story and it only has like 25 chapters :(

Strange I clicked 5 stars on each last time oh well.-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

This fic is for a small niche of fans. You got Pokespeak, fake mons and a MC who degrades mentally. It's well written and the interactions with his pokemon are believable. I however think the system is broken and he's having too many lucky encounters. I personally don't like the direction this story takes, but you could try it out and see..

An interesting take on the Pokémon universe . With subtle node's towards the original story with Ash. . It's also nice to see the main character slowly began to connect to his Pokémon and to the other background characters.😎😎😎

I love how the story is slowly progressing together. I also like the flash back at the end pulling things together. ---------------------------------------------------------------

I like what you have written so far and looking forward for the next chapter to read. Hopefully, the mc will start using his new ghost type pokemon he discover. Maybe he can discover a new Dragon or fairy type??? Who knows right?? The character development that is presented is good and I like you didn't make him op to soon. I like that how you presented his personality and took time to analyze his abilities. Overall, it's an enjoyable time to read and hope you continue and post chapter 26 very soon!!!

Very interesting a new take on Pokemon fanfiction I like the fact that he's adding in new Pokemon what's a good read that suggests anyone who likes Pokemon to read this novel