Review Detail of amaturewriter in Lazy immortal

not going to lie.the first 2 chps were kinda boring? IDK but they weren't that interesting but as I read on it was dope...I mean a stupid OP MC that hides his power..i like **** like..only problem is that this guy is an idiot..dont do it...keep him cool smart and lazy....add some romance and fluff and if harem keep it small...but do build the romance and dont do some wuxia **** and separate the lovers or the reason they fall in love is because they dude is strong and the chick is hot...build the damn **** or just no romance.. anyway goodluck..its interesting.. **: I cant help but imagine the hamster as the same one from overlord