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Review Detail of Chainslock in Optabilis Mundo: Shroud of Black Resort

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The story is narrated good, but I assume English isn’t the author’s first language. There are awkward tenses. But the important thing here is the concept. Good job on that! It is very intriguing. Mirai and Julietta are by far my favorite characters. I won’t spoil for her power, but it’s a good twist. Ridiculously good and unique. Very much recommended~

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Optabilis Mundo: Shroud of Black Resort

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Thank you for the review although I'm quite sure to edit some "weird" texts, so I'll just fix the story with clearer sense.