Review Detail of Tzzire in Walking the Tortured Path

Giving myself 5 stars because ratings are crucial to getting noticed on Webnovel (and admittedly because I've seen every other author do the same) Im enjoying writing the story, I hope you guys can bear with the somewhat slow release times. I'd rather put out my best chapter than put out a bunch at a time. Please let me know what you don't like about my story in the comments, you can leave a review too but I ask that you use the comments because having a good rating important for new writers to pick up new readers. Thanks guys