Well the story is cool just dont make it more tragic and despairing for our mc let him have his own ambition to become strong and have fun with the characters like jean connie annie reiner and many more while hiding his lightning power otherwise they will make him a lightning conductor for titans so be strong in his combat style with the gears maneuvear and anyway everything is perfect hope u keep goin
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