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writegood
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It was interesting for the first two chapters...then everything got too absurd. All the characters are rather stupid or bend too quickly to accepting the MC's rather stupid actions. Questions that should be asked are not asked. Consequences that should be there are not there. Really, I can't figure out where it all went wrong.

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Broly in the Marvel Universe

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Where were you at when I started this trash ass story. I cringe when I come back to this

writegood
writegoodLv2writegood

No idea...I'm just a traveler that got lost on the road of life and stumbled on your story. There is potential in your story, you just have to want to bring it out. If you don't, then yeah, you summarised it perfectly as 'trash ass story'...your words, not mine. I've read a lot fiction and fanfiction over the years, my tastes are unique as any other reader might as well have, but I do have a general idea on what good story should raise the chances of people enjoying it...also I tried writing a fanfic once and I've come to realise what the majority of authors are missing...assuming that author's post their stories so the public can make the author's ego's feel good and just all around feel nice and confident because people are saying good things...those were the reasons I had at the back of my head when I first published. And so, I quickly learned from my first fanfic that I was going for instant gratification while tricking myself and saying to myself that I was only posting to use the public as alpha readers (yeah, it doesn't work that way). And so, I developed and continually develop a writing methodology that suits me. In short, even if I'm just writing fanfics and things don't get published immediately, I'm taking writing seriously and I know my weaknesses (and so, I strive to bring in others to solve those weakness...such as alpha readers, beta readers, editors, getting private reviews, and even going as far to , after a certain point in my writing, hiring people to read it out loud and record it for me so I can know where the cringe is). So, if you want to get potential out of story, write a lot, call it a first draft, then figure out a methodology that would help you bring about the story you want to tell...it may as well basically boil down to write a lot and almost never publish...or strive for perfection until your private readers tell you to suck it up and make your story public. I can only recommend reading alot, doing tons of research, and listing to the Writing Excuses podcast :D Oh, and when I say taking writing seriously, I mean not treating things like twittter where you'd right you have time and publish with minimal editing. As a reader, I can tell when an author doesn't take things seriously. And, as a writer, I can say that I have fallen into the traps that as a reader I hate seeing.

Werewolvking:Where were you at when I started this trash ass story. I cringe when I come back to this