Review Detail of HaremQueen in Broly in the Marvel Universe
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Trash. Just saying things does not make it believable. The author literally had the mc surpass Stark and Oscorp industries in less than a year because his products were too “innovative”. Who’s gonna buy that crap. At least make it more believable.
Broly in the Marvel Universe
Werewolvking
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Werewolvking:That’s why I made a new novel lol. Does it really matter that much how he made his money it’s not a major part of the story
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That’s not what I was really going for. This whole novel was supposed to be a blueprint for later when I remade the story. But I started liking the idea of Akore a lot
HaremQueen:Well... it’s the little things that paint the bigger picture.
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Well.. I guess that solves some kind of mystery. I liked the idea though, just... very poorly written, not well thought out, and definitely too forced.
Werewolvking:That’s not what I was really going for. This whole novel was supposed to be a blueprint for later when I remade the story. But I started liking the idea of Akore a lot
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HaremQueen:Well.. I guess that solves some kind of mystery. I liked the idea though, just... very poorly written, not well thought out, and definitely too forced.
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I’ll try it. I don’t like to lie on my reviews so if you see another review from me on that story, it’ll only be my honest opinion. :3
Werewolvking:If you want to you can read my other novel akore