This is a blatant hate review but fuck male preg. There's also the unrealistic and blatant fact that he seems to be treated as less than human and no one gives a shit. (i skipped chaps) another thing is i don't believe you described appearances. 2nd if the parents hate the mc so much and the fact he seems to have no human rights then they could've just disowned him long ago. I could probably find more if i read the entirety but i mainly did this so it isn't blatant spam. I did provide criticism.
Onexal
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LIKEIll make sure to remember to add descriptions in the future. Thanks for that! And I only made it so males can have kids but this isn’t that unrealistic according to what I’ve heard some time ago, about some guy giving birth from his *cough* anyways, this might be false. Thank you for the criticism. P.S I have no clue why the MC’s parents hated her so much xD I’m so sorry for the unplanned story. I’m only 13 so I don’t know much. -Onexal
Onexal:Ill make sure to remember to add descriptions in the future. Thanks for that! And I only made it so males can have kids but this isn’t that unrealistic according to what I’ve heard some time ago, about some guy giving birth from his *cough* anyways, this might be false. Thank you for the criticism. P.S I have no clue why the MC’s parents hated her so much xD I’m so sorry for the unplanned story. I’m only 13 so I don’t know much. -Onexal
DarkImmortal_Intel:. . . Whoever told you males give birth to kids.... is lying to you...