I'm the author and I wanted to start with thanks. I try to write a few thousand words a day, but life happens. That's why my chapters are so long. I think the characters are pretty realistic and fun. If you have thoughts about the story please let me know and I will take it into account.

SUPER LONG CHAPTERS!!! If you are hesitant to start reading this novel because of the small amount of chapters, DONT BE!!! Each chapter is basically the equivalent of 3 or 4 normal length ones on other novels. And for those interested in the lewd parts of this novel, you can just jump right in and start reading. Although the very first sexual encounter at the very beginning of the first chapter isn’t what I would say as satisfying, the many other sexual scenes afterwards, and I mean LOTS of sexual scenes, are well done in my opinion. The overall story is pretty decent, and much more time and effort are put into the plot than almost all other lewdy novels that I have read. Although saying that, it still isn’t the best. The MC’s background story is decently done, but there are many places where things were just added for the convenience of the plot, such as her ‘broken’ personality and why she can adapt to situations quickly. Oh, and for those who might want to know, the MC isn’t hesitant at having *** at all, rather, she is overly passionate about most love making. If people like this novel or novels like this(novels with butt loads of ***), I would also highly recommend reading Tales of a Seductress.

Great read really recommend it's one of the best I've read . 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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Reviewed at end of volume 1. Excellent work. Really enjoyed it. Constructive criticism to follow. Transitions in setting can be abrupt, but its usually cleared up in a paragraph or so. The girls felt more distinct at the beginning. They've started to blend together into skins of the same girlfriend, a bit. Especially the mid-late ones. The last two were better, but it would be nice to have more distinction between roles/personalities for gf 4+(the last two are still new enough that development should still be going). Biggest foible would be boy toy, as he should have a more negative impact on her gfs than he does. From both sides. He has less resistance to the gfs than pinkie did, while he has more reason to resist. They also don't seem to mind his dislike of them half as much as they should. Basically, he seems like an ancillary character that exists only for his interaction with mc when his role in the story is of greater importance.

I like the story and i wish they had more to hone world wise but other than that the characters developed pretty cool they each felt like a different person and growth thats all i can really say.