The Story practically reads itself, I haven't noticed any flaws in grammar or spelling! Great work on that part. Story is a good ol' fantasy setting with light gaming elements mixed in, which hits the spot just right for me. Characters don't really stand out negatively, but maybe the Author will work on making them unique and alive a little bit more :) Can recommend!
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