Review Detail of Qob in Offer to the CEO
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The story has potential but the writing is holding it back. Things keep being repeated over and over and take up way too many chapters. There is no need to keep repeated incidents in detail to every character. At this point it just feels like repetition is to make up for the word count. In addition, the court/law stuff goes too much into detail. I never thought too much detail was bad but after reading the chapters I realized that too much detail would lead the chapters to become boring and make you lose interest. I have honestly been skimming through chapters just because some things get dragged on for 5+ chapters. At this point I’m losing interest in the story itself.
Offer to the CEO
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Thank you for taking the time to leave a review. Sorry you feel disappointed about some aspects of the story, but in part the repeating of information particular until we are through the court case, but in different ways is a way of showing what victims of what Anna went through have to do, not only to be believed but to have their abusers brought to justice. I did dial it back after taking on feedback, and yours is appreciated.
