Review Detail of Chinita_M in Offer to the CEO

Nice story but author please stop going in circles with long speeches,,sorry but it somehow tends to get boring.no chance to leave any comment,totally frustrating.you've given the female lead no strength and male lead is somehow confused(just my opinion don't kill me)..make them the ultimate power couple after the hospital.let her fight,not just tremble and cry and get slapped or beaten up every time.its depressing and as a woman it brings bad memories to me.you're supposed to empower us not take some of us back to past terrible experiences.its a nice story you just need to up your game,,cut on the long conversations with no meaning