Review Detail of Junnoyao0606 in Offer to the CEO
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Be patient and read atleat 20chapters,then comment.story may have some similarities,even I lost interest by reading earlier comments.they r idiots.this story is damn good..very beautiful story.everyone must try it. to author: u need an editor seriously, i may be not so good in English but i still find some grammatical errors nd sentence construction error. it would be great if u can describe nature,wind , sunset,smell of rain etc rather giving fillar sentences
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Meghalovebarkha:Mr. Kushal I totally agree with you. Firstly read atleast 20 chapters then comment. I find this novel quite intersting bcoz where is revenge and everone loves rebels novel
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loekie_92:True about author needing a good translator, one that is not so out of touch grammatically ...... Plus what is it with the repetition of lines?
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loekie_92:True about author needing a good translator, one that is not so out of touch grammatically ...... Plus what is it with the repetition of lines?
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loekie_92:True about author needing a good translator, one that is not so out of touch grammatically ...... Plus what is it with the repetition of lines?
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I notice that too, but it doesn’t bother me at all,we are gifted with common sense so lets use it.And yeah... thanks for sharing your talent for us who love to read. More power.
klmorgan:Thank you for the comments. As this is a hobby (I have a full time job), having an editor is somewhat a luxury. BUT I will eventually, as time permits go back and re-edit chapters to fix up grammatical and sentence structure errors. I will take on board your comments about other descriptions
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