Review Detail of Chouko in Offer to the CEO

The overall quality of the book could use some improvement. While it was comprehensible, the plot itself was plain in the fact that it follows a cliche plot without providing any twists, that usually come with such plot-lines. There were also grammar errors, which were irksome to read without feeling frustrated. Also, the characters themselves were poorly developed, which made it hard for me feel any emotions for any of them, such as love or hate. Some of the actions taken by the characters could have been reasonable if there were more details and backgrounds provided. More description and detail could be provided as well a grammar checks to make this a better story to read. A good thing to keep in mind is “show, not tell” because we can all tell things, but that would take out all the fun and excitement readers get from reading a book.