Review Detail of kate_chaste in The Eternal Guardian
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I absolutely love this story! i wish there was more stories like this one. I've read isekai type stories where a specialist of their field like a doctor goes to another world, but as soon as they arrive they just seem to forget who they are, their professions seems to be just a honorary title and they just go and 'explore' the magical world or whatever. I love this story because the MC keeps his personality the same and looks at the world with a more analytical eye
The Eternal Guardian
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Hi there and firstly thank you so much for the review. You will notice the latest update is around a month or 2 ago. After the excellently critical review by ResidentialPsycho, I went back through my novel and highlighted the things he mentioned. I am currently rewriting some parts of it, therefore I am sorry if you think it's incomplete (coz honestly it is). Worry not, the main story will be the same. What I am rewriting is some add-ons, and also some story corrections/changes since I realized there was some chronological inconsistencies when I re-read it from 1st chap to latest in 1 go. I greatly value it when people review my novel as it shows to me that there people interested. Also, in the future if you continue reading and find any errors or inconsistencies, do point them out (being the person writing, my views can be narrowed sometimes). I will correct them or at least explain my reasoning for writing them that way, as I previously did with ResidentialPsycho.