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AardwarkThe2nd
AardwarkThe2ndLv55yrAardwarkThe2nd

I am having a review swap with BerriApplepi, so here we go: Being based off the true dark story of Sleeping Beauty intrigued me, search for it, it is kinda ****ed up. There we go. Now let's go over my qualms with the story... MC is described as having Riches, Beauty, and Brain while having a love of sleeping and disposition to literally sleep anywhere. This seems fishy AF, no one with any brain sleeps anywhere in public without someone they trust watching over. While the starting events happened because the MC was drugged, sleep disorder/ narcolepsy is a real thing and IDK, I think this novel kinda cheapens having it. You know, narcolepsy sufferers have constant fatigue due to extreme sleep deprivation, sleep attacks, memory issues - short term memory loss, fake memories, hallucinations and brain fog, loss of control over muscles... Not being able to sleep brings a whole range of problems. Sorry if my rant felt like it came out of nowhere, but narcolepsy is serious business.

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The Devil's Sleeping Beauty

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BerriApplepi
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I see. I didn't look deeply into that but now that you mentioned it, I decided to change the part where she can literally sleep anywhere. I didn't really planned on making her have a narcolepsy since I plan on writing the reason on why she's always sleepy in the future chapters. Anyway, thank you for your review! 😊

EdwinTr
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minyoongistan
minyoongistanLv4minyoongistan

I am so scared, please make it a happy ending!

Marjor3e
Marjor3eLv11Marjor3e

Try something new and unique - The King's Beloved - i recommend it if you like romance fiction, totally not a cliche story

e4j
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Nice one

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