I trusted this story because of the good reviews, but I became disappointed with the writing. The writing is basic and slightly underwhelming in its description. For example, it leaves most of the imagining to the reader, which gets quite tiresome after some twenty chapters of simple actions. Furthermore, although the characters are true to their canon personality, the author doesn’t write about Naruto in a way that makes him seem grown up. If you want a story about a slightly OP Naruto and a brotherly Sasuke, then this is for you. However, if you want a more realistic or angsty version, then you might find yourself scrolling through other stories. It’s not bad, but it doesn’t grip you like some others do. You could leave it after fifty chapters and not feel a thing. (Not an insult to the author though!! 🙂Keep writing)
Indie131998
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