I think that the contrast between the bleakness of the start and the color still in the protagonist's life provides a nice contrast when viewing into the story's world. The story is easy to read and the imagery comes across clearly. As a result, intentions are easier to grasp too. Cheers!
Asteralles
Liked it!
LIKEAsteralles:Jamison_C, please give me more time before giving you a review. I have something urgent to do today so it'll come a little bit late. I'm sorry.