This has been one of my favorite reads on here and I'm looking forward to reading more from this author. The Good: Shola is one of the better FL and is completely original to this website. It was nice and refreshing to have a BW/AM couple here, which is rare and intriguing. The action moved along at a decent pace without bogging the reader down with unnecessary descriptions and useless chapters just to drag the story out. The use of emojis was a bit of fun that gave the story a lighthearted look and feel. The best thing about this story is it's accessibility and directness. The Ugly: Nathan is the 2nd worse ML I've come across so far. He was weak, unreliable, incompetent, disappointing and lacked foresight, judgment and wisdom. He literally failed the FL every single chapter of this work. I could not find a reason to root for him and Shola to be together. I kept thinking that maybe he would get better but he never did. The only 2 things he did consistently well was sex and work. It seems like that's all he put any real effort into was having sex and going to work. The only other bad thing is just the story needing to be edited. Everything else was okay. Keep up the good work Author ❤🧡💛💚💙💜🤎🤍🖤
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