Review Detail of Unniesangbukid in The Long-awaited Mr Han

As a reader, I felt that there's something lacking the way the story written. I am not an expert in writing however in a redear's point of view I can sense that something is not quite well. I hope the author can find it and improve that area. As to the development of plot.. I can say its there and there is only a little bit of similarities to some story that I have read. I hope there will be more unique twist as the story develops. 😊