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This is one strange novel, I don't know what got in to the head of the author but I'll say this now. This is trash, the very first thing you would read would be some boring **** you wouldn't understand because they literally explain what should be uncover slowly as the story goes deeper to the plot, he just shove it on your face like "oh this is what the mc is going to face" you just spoil the story. As a writer the very first thing you should write about were interesting thing that would induce the reader with the idea that what you're writing is interesting and entertaining that would hook the readers but what you did their, damn one of the worst I've read so far. You didn't even give the mc a scene, you just prioritise your explanation more that the actual MAIN CHARACTER and what's worse is that the mc wasn't even mentioned or what the hell is he doing since he is born in your time skip of 17yrs, there literally weren't any mention of the mc. Another thing is what the hell are you thinking creating your own terminologies and weird sounding name?! Hell, do you know that creating your own terminologies turn off readers? The reader won't understand ****, you're only making it difficult to understand what you're trying to convey. Man this is very basic dude, you should know about this already.