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Khavos_Rudd
Khavos_RuddLv65yrKhavos_Rudd

Not a complex review because there is something fishy going on. This is a weird one for me. There are barely any reviews for a story that begun a month ago. 160 plus chapters in. Some random dude dumping on every chapter there is. This is a very good story full of twists and turns. No one is talking about it. Anyone care to tell me what is going on? I feel like I should be the villain here by opposing your plots just for the author's sake. Most villains or antagonists in webnovels are paper-thin baddies with barely understandable motivations. Someone killed a son or a relative but there is almost no context, no background to the tale other than that the offending son that was killed was some rude character who deserved to die. This story took care to develop a good measure of affection for the killed sister. They are siblings bonded not just by blood but also secrets - as in the case of the System the younger harbors - and a life full of trials. They are multi-dimensional and right up to the point we read of the death of the clan's killers we were rooting for a cessation of hostilities. At least I was. I could see that they were a desperate people driven to do bad things for survival. The author did not take the easy path. They did not cause a rapport to built between the MC and the secretish clan. Indeed, for a moment there, we were led to believe that some kind of connection was wrought and that the MC would somehow link up with a System user. Instead, the System user will become the villain to fear. And she would be within her rights to foster enmity with the MC because of the death of her sister. The complexity of the situation is why I find the development of this story interesting.

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daoistkitty
daoistkittyLv15daoistkitty

I think it’s the title. When I looked at it I thought he misspelled swordmaster. Then I found out it’s suppose to swordmeister. So if the title is misspelled what does that say for the novel?

Khavos_Rudd
Khavos_RuddLv6Khavos_Rudd

Now you are fishy...shark-like fishy... :D

daoistkitty:I think it’s the title. When I looked at it I thought he misspelled swordmaster. Then I found out it’s suppose to swordmeister. So if the title is misspelled what does that say for the novel?
SILVERINK
SILVERINKLv12SILVERINK

I read this, because I believe in the first sentence: 'It's not a complicated review' Now you have betray me.

Khavos_Rudd
Khavos_RuddLv6Khavos_Rudd

Uh, I meant I would not do a complete breakdown of the 5 categories and instead just offer a ****** view of what I analyzed. Really, I did not mean to betray your trust beyond exposing the conspiracy

SILVERINK:I read this, because I believe in the first sentence: 'It's not a complicated review' Now you have betray me.
Amaranth
AmaranthLv12Amaranth

Well they fixed it now

daoistkitty:I think it’s the title. When I looked at it I thought he misspelled swordmaster. Then I found out it’s suppose to swordmeister. So if the title is misspelled what does that say for the novel?
Khavos_Rudd
Khavos_RuddLv6Khavos_Rudd

Someone please tell me why censors would ban the word 's i m p l e'???

Polelong
PolelongLv5Polelong

Meister is a correctly spelt word

daoistkitty:I think it’s the title. When I looked at it I thought he misspelled swordmaster. Then I found out it’s suppose to swordmeister. So if the title is misspelled what does that say for the novel?
daoistkitty
daoistkittyLv15daoistkitty

It wasn’t like a week ago. It was fixed. Though I do appreciate being proven wrong

Polelong:Meister is a correctly spelt word
Polelong
PolelongLv5Polelong

Sorry, i thought you were trying to be a smart arse. Sorry, for the misunderstanding

daoistkitty:It wasn’t like a week ago. It was fixed. Though I do appreciate being proven wrong
daoistkitty
daoistkittyLv15daoistkitty

No problem. I think the author knew and was waiting for someone to point it out so he could troll them. I fell victim

Polelong:Sorry, i thought you were trying to be a smart arse. Sorry, for the misunderstanding
novel_fanatic
novel_fanaticLv13novel_fanatic

Lol

daoistkitty:No problem. I think the author knew and was waiting for someone to point it out so he could troll them. I fell victim
HansTheCool
HansTheCoolLv5HansTheCool

I've seen death note already, I think paper thin villains are just want I need

Devilwolfrine
DevilwolfrineLv4Devilwolfrine

Yes

daoistkitty:No problem. I think the author knew and was waiting for someone to point it out so he could troll them. I fell victim
Devilwolfrine
DevilwolfrineLv4Devilwolfrine

Yes

daoistkitty:No problem. I think the author knew and was waiting for someone to point it out so he could troll them. I fell victim
TheSoundOfSilence
TheSoundOfSilenceLv11TheSoundOfSilence

I don't know, maybe there's a novel Website called like that...

Khavos_Rudd:Someone please tell me why censors would ban the word 's i m p l e'???
Khavos_Rudd
Khavos_RuddLv6Khavos_Rudd

No way that could be the reason, must be another conspiracy over the use of certain words

TheSoundOfSilence:I don't know, maybe there's a novel Website called like that...
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