Review Detail of AerynSun in The Madness Within

Very interesting premise with vivid descriptions that catch your attention. The first chapter was a little violent and twisted with the mom but that’s probably to be expected of a dark vampire novel. Enjoyed the plot and story development so far. Maybe add a little bit of background to some of the things written about such as the Yasu, and the description about the parents’ cult was slightly confusing at times but overall OK. Keep up the good work! ☺️💪