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CallMeDage
CallMeDageLv55yr
2019-01-04 02:39

I love this. I really enjoyed the way every character was introduced. I like how we slowly find out more about them and the fact that the side characters don't just go *poof* after getting mentioned once or twice throughout the story. There was honestly not a single thing that felt out of place or forced (compared to the CEO novels, this is gold for me). I don't even know what I should focus on when reviewing this, I can't find a single thing that I didn't like about it. Like, damn, this is really well thought. I fell in love with the characters and would love learning more about them. Reading this made me really reluctant to go back to reading anything else on this site. . . I demand a refund for my feelings. Now I can't read anything without getting disappointed when I notice the lack of details and realism there is in the 'popular' novels. The only reason I gave this a score of 4.8 is the stability of updates, I didn't go for a lower score for the updates because the author already mentioned this is not the story they are focusing on right now. (I haven't read the other novel they are writting, but considering how much I liked this one I doubt I will dislike the other one.)

Chasing Changes

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half_emptyAuthor

Wow! Thanks for such a great review! And also, thanks for your support 😄 my other novel is in the sports genre so it’s really different😅 it’s okay if it’s not your cup of tea

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CallMeDage
CallMeDageLv5

I've never let a different genre keep me away from a good book (I'm also a fan of sports so that ain't a problem) As long as the quality is good I'll gobble it up. （・ｗ・）

half_empty:Wow! Thanks for such a great review! And also, thanks for your support 😄 my other novel is in the sports genre so it’s really different😅 it’s okay if it’s not your cup of tea
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Hey guys! Writer here! Just want to let everyone know that this novel is now available on amazon kindle for $3. Free if you have kindle unlimited! Support me if you can. If not, I understand. Thanks! ❤️😊

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Darian
DarianLv6

Great characters and story. While the male main lead is a high level football player, the author focuses on the relationships rather than the sports action. Well edited and written overall. (This review is based on the full novel available on Kindle from Amazon.)

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Tiz55
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The story is the second work of this author and the focus was placed on her other work, so the updates were rare, but are now coming daily. Character development and the delivery of emotions and the whole setting is top notch. Without doubt one of the better/best novel on this app.

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Kaz0
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The relationships of the main characters is heartwarming. The story is imaginative yet deep . I felt like the scenery and settings came alive. I would recommend it to anyone.

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Mars_bar
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Without fail, this author has amazed me with two amazing stories now. I read the entire book in one sitting after realizing I could get it on prime. The novel was filled with heart warming and unique characters that kept me flipping to the next page. I have nothing but praise for the author and this story, and hope to see a sequel or short side story to add to this wonderful book.

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Giggs
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Came read this after reading The Hitting Zone. What a great story! There's a fast development for the characters and it's very fun to read. And with a right amount of drama in the middle to keep things interesting.

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MartaldN
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Great read, sad that i got addicted and blew thru the chs avaliable. Definitely satisfying enough to get through my hitting zone withdrawal.

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Come back to hitting zone, jake is missing you

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