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Review Detail of MisterE05 in You Are Mine

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MisterE05Lv45yrMisterE05

It has a few typos and gramatical issues here and there. For example skipping short words to complete a sentence. Such as: "I, Too, Off" Those of course are examples and not directed to the actual story. Point is some words are missing. I reccomend you too use "Google Docs". It has an inbuilt spell check and as for gramatic errors, make sure to read and edit a part a few times before posting. It is beyond helpful. As for the story, i did enjoy it. It has twists that would make even a grown man cry. Keep up the amazing work.

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mockingbird81
mockingbird81Authormockingbird81

Thank for the honest review. You are right, been writing the chapters directly in inkstone ang using my phone coz i am always on the go. I will do my best to do it on google docs to check grammar and spelling. I will also have a 3rd peraon review it before posting.

5yr
mockingbird81
mockingbird81Authormockingbird81

Thank for the honest review. You are right, been writing the chapters directly in inkstone ang using my phone coz i am always on the go. I will do my best to do it on google docs to check grammar and spelling. I will also have a 3rd peraon review it before posting.

5yr
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