Review Detail of JunkieOverThe_Moon in I’ll reach the stars and moon for you

So, heres the review, my dear author. The story's interesting and got me hooked up fir quite sometimes. Romance is good and enjoyable but the only thing that needs some work would be the punctuation and sentence structure. Just a bit of editing and it would be awesome!! My suggestion, read ur chapter two times before posting it. I do it too and itavfabulous how many mistakes u can spot. At first, it will seem like a headache but then it will be quite enjoyable and helpful. Nothing beats the happiness of correcting ur own work and making it better!! Best of luck!!