Review Detail of Doomey in My Planet System : Celestial's Conquest

okay this novel was good but its confusing af the characters names are crazy I just cant tell who is talking or if their related the names are just way too crazy for me I just couldn't get into it. Not only that the whole being kidnapped theirs no kidnapper who would be so nice to the kid if they did they wouldnt kidnap him in the first place. Along with the fact he just starts to mock his kidnappers with ridiculous insults starts to get weird for not only did they not even make sense they werent even offensive in my opinion I couldnt tell if they were joking or acting. Not only that but if they had all this money and connections you would think they would have someone watch the door or go somewhere that cops cant find they just committed a stupid crime in broad daylight where everyone could see which just doesn't happen especially if their supposed to be experienced in this kind of thing, it is like they wanted to be caught. I started out liking the description of the novel but it got way to weird and confusing for me to understand a lot of it is too unrealistic for the plot the author has developed. I would rank it lower if I didnt feel bad for the work he already put into it but it has a lot of potential if he fixes their names into something easier to remember and identify for all the characters in the novel, He would earn my 3 stars. For 4 stars he needs to fix the insults and plot for the gang members an for my full 5 stars he needs to fix the sentence structure, spelling mistakes and a lot of the errors, maybe get someone to proof read it.