One of the best Marvel reincarnation fanfics i have read and trust me when I say this that I have read a lot of them. The story is unique in the sense that the mc created his own company and gadgets and weapons. Though using the radio active spider for a powerup was a bit cliche but the most logical and plausible way. Also a thumbs up for using the Oz serum and improving it. I would recommend that going forward the MC should build an armour auit not like ironman but more form fitting. Try to get the formula for Baddassium from ironman in the Ironman 2 movie. Later on maybe you could teach him magic from the Ancient one. So he could be like Dr. Doom (a combination of magic and science) as both have their advantages. I really liked your novel keep up the great work appreciate it.đđ
godfreyngsze
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LIKEYou could make his x gene give the power to harness and control cosmic energy or even astral magic and make him a technomage. Keep up the great work with your novel.
godfreyngsze:Thank you for your review and feedback. good ideas... actually some of it seems similar to my plan much later for mc future... still thinking for xgene powers... only got few more chapters before i need pick one,
not too op. how about something similar to kaioken in dragonball but got limits and drawback. need to make future fights interesting i got 10 options but haven't decided yet lol
Kurama_is_tsundere:You could make his x gene give the power to harness and control cosmic energy or even astral magic and make him a technomage. Keep up the great work with your novel.
godfreyngsze:either way thank you for your options. have a great day
Dont make him too op but please give his power some potential for growth so that later on he can fight head to head with thanos's black order if not thanos himself.
godfreyngsze:not too op. how about something similar to kaioken in dragonball but got limits and drawback. need to make future fights interesting i got 10 options but haven't decided yet lol
I want to ask something.What the stories based on?i mean movies/comics(if movies what is it spiderman,amazing spiderman or the newest one)
godfreyngsze:either way thank you for your options. have a great day
Kingthor:I want to ask something.What the stories based on?i mean movies/comics(if movies what is it spiderman,amazing spiderman or the newest one)
godfreyngsze:Thank you for your review and feedback. good ideas... actually some of it seems similar to my plan much later for mc future... still thinking for xgene powers... only got few more chapters before i need pick one,
I have read that fanfic but while in it the MC makes some good decisions he does not use magic but that is not a problem. The problem I had with The Spider was its excessive drama. His girlfriend leaving him, depression etc. He stops improving then for sometime. But does make a comeback so it's good. Just I hated the "over the top" drama part.
BloodStone:What you just said looks like the novel "The Spider". Look it up.
I have read that fanfic but while in it the MC makes some good decisions he does not use magic but that is not a problem. The problem I had with The Spider was its excessive drama. His girlfriend leaving him, depression etc. He stops improving then for sometime. But does make a comeback so it's good. Just I hated the "over the top" drama part.
BloodStone:What you just said looks like the novel "The Spider". Look it up.
In that I agree with you. I´m not a drama person so ,after his kids appeared from the future, reading it became harder and harder and I eventually stopped, but I liked the rest of the plot where he gots stronger and invents gadjets. If you like marvel fanfictions I recommend " The Merchant of Death ", the MC reincarnated in Tony stark's body and is evil but the plot is interesting.
Kurama_is_tsundere:I have read that fanfic but while in it the MC makes some good decisions he does not use magic but that is not a problem. The problem I had with The Spider was its excessive drama. His girlfriend leaving him, depression etc. He stops improving then for sometime. But does make a comeback so it's good. Just I hated the "over the top" drama part.
I read merchant of death and I really loved it. Manipulative and Intelligent MC are few in fanfics sadly.
BloodStone:In that I agree with you. I´m not a drama person so ,after his kids appeared from the future, reading it became harder and harder and I eventually stopped, but I liked the rest of the plot where he gots stronger and invents gadjets. If you like marvel fanfictions I recommend " The Merchant of Death ", the MC reincarnated in Tony stark's body and is evil but the plot is interesting.
If you like manipulative and intelligent MC, then you should read " Warlock of Magus World ". It's not a fanfiction, it's a webnovel, but is a very good novel, and the plots and schemes of MC will blow your mind.
Kurama_is_tsundere:I read merchant of death and I really loved it. Manipulative and Intelligent MC are few in fanfics sadly.
Well the sad thing is that most of the good ones stopped so their just incomplete but if you really want to you can just Google search 'marvel fanfiction' click on the link for Fanfiction. Net there you can find lots of options even crossovers from Harry Potter to Naruto to DC. If you are interested in this site I recommend to "In Marvel World with Random Power System" also the Online Version of the Marvel World" is pretty good but it's a translation not an original.
TheDemonNazI:Hey you said you knew a lot of marvel reincarnation novels... SHOW ME THEM PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU!!!
These are just some new ones but they have a lot of potential. 1. Living in the Marvel world with Dota System. (I am fan of the game, so I am bit biased). 2. A Hero's Journey( I really love this one and I am putting some of my power stones here). - hope this helped đđ
TheDemonNazI:Hey you said you knew a lot of marvel reincarnation novels... SHOW ME THEM PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU!!!