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2019-01-10 14:32

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You are just stealing from other novels and still it's trun a into a garbage First you start with anime - in another world with my smartphone Then solo leveling manga- E rank dungeon , daily quest , and why the planty for not completing quest (solo leveling manga has its reason but why did you used that planty , will system force Sora to kill some one because they fighting Sora with killing instinct , and your GOD why would he mantion harem it should be mc's decision or a story line that creates that kind of situation, why would God even suggest that and if God wants a harem or may be happy life then he will not add planty in any quest it should mc's choice that he wants to be strong or he wanted a easy life ,become a cook or may be mary some one ) Your story from beginning it's like some otaku's imagination ( not complaining though , I mean even I imagined something like that ) but your story's base is weak , explain me why did anbu says strong chakra in first chapter his MP mean chakra was weak . I mean you want him to start weak and then climb to top so why did you send 20 anbu to pick him up , And for tsunade she is not some girl who will bluss every time some one compliment her I mean she was trained with jiraya the most perverted person in history . she is strong not only physically but also mentally. Seriously wrost story line I mean since you are stealing from other manga and anime ( the famous ones) that means you don't have to put some efforts in world building and character's background and you didn't but .. you didn't put efforts in story either to be true you did nothing except stealing and common imagination

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