Review Detail of Blue_Magenta in The Typhoon's Wife

I am someone who usually read comments before choosing anything (to read, watch, buy, etc.), and although comments and ratings are not the end all and be all for me when choosing , they give me a rough idea more or less on what the story holds. So having decided to read the novel (primarily because it's one of the shorter ones), I'm here asking myself at barely 1/3s of the novel, "Am I the only one not fully appreciating the pace of the story?". Firstly, theres the grammatical errors (the improper placements or lack of punctuation marks gives the my OC self anxiety, I'm sorry), there are parts of paragraphs missing, too. I've been skipping chapters til I've reached the ending already, which more often than not is an indicator for me that I will not be reading the novel in full and get the gist of the story from my "skipping" or bookmark it and maybe come back to it in the future. I understand though that this was the author's first novel (reading from the Author's Note), so it's quite understandable that there would be misses and lapses along the story. I'm most likely be checking out Love Struck and see if the writing has gotten better there. Well, that plus that I found Ah Hai here to be cute (being the youngest). Oh and btw, whatever happened to Qi Cheng and Onita? Like. did I miss anything (from skipping-I'm very sorry, Author) or their story just really ended after the 3 girls plan to use Neil to make Qi Cheng jealous?