Review Detail of Bluebird_Kadz in Beyond The Impossible

As a courtesy I'm just going to post 3 stars since I haven't actually read the story. I'm just here to ask why do you use a summary that reads like something from fanfiction.net? Your summary provides conflicting ideas and vastly untenable scope of dramatism. It would've been better to emphasise how special she could be while implying mysteriously that there's a reason to her state of affairs, alluding to a fight of galactic proportions. Well, that's just how I would do it anyways.