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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv44yrDavid_Drake

A fic that is filled with humor. There isn't any over used jokes either. However, at times this story does go on a tangent on the mini arcs. Like the whole kidnapping business he had with the king. That situation was out of left field, but luckily the author manage to tone down the intensity of future arcs afterwards. And the MC has a single clone to manage his life outside of his debauchery. This gives a nice way to introduce and develop some plot lines. Allowing the author to bring them back for some nice world building later on. I guess the only negatives I do see is that the main plot has been forgotten. The MC was suppose to protect his sister, but now its more of him dealing with his family issues and crazy lolis/dyrads. Don't get me wrong, it is really entertaining to read these scenes and how it builds older characters. Showing that this MC is rather ruthless at times and does kill people. (Females are included.) I'd recommend you give this a try.

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My Sister The Villainess

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AnonCommander
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Ooh, nice review bud. Thanks. Tho, i mean yeah, but whats he to protect her from? The only reason for it was cuz of possible harassment from the Heroine, but the girl's his personal stalker now who hasnt done anything wrong. Actually, i think he's gonna have to protect OTHERS from HER. Yall think she playin about world domination via baked goods. Tsk. And all for the glorious global Incestification plan.... Haha. The brocon is real. He will have to address that soon too. Its around that time for Day's Matchmaking service to make its return.

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

Oh god... those bake goods better be heavenly for wincest

AnonCommander:Ooh, nice review bud. Thanks. Tho, i mean yeah, but whats he to protect her from? The only reason for it was cuz of possible harassment from the Heroine, but the girl's his personal stalker now who hasnt done anything wrong. Actually, i think he's gonna have to protect OTHERS from HER. Yall think she playin about world domination via baked goods. Tsk. And all for the glorious global Incestification plan.... Haha. The brocon is real. He will have to address that soon too. Its around that time for Day's Matchmaking service to make its return.