Review Detail of Author_x_Author in Endless Journey: Infinite Realms

I kind get why this story has so little views even with the number of chapters. Listen man i get that you’re a newbie writer and i commend you for your work both for the writing style and the amount of chapters.,heck even the genre of world traveling is dope. But! I just started the novel and so i need to be hooked so what do you do? You introduce an extremely hateful and annoying character at the start. Then? You make the mc’s first enemy into his love interest... now i get that the second one is not necessarily bad heck even good if done right. But you just messed up her character and made it seem as if she is an ice queen then and extremely warm person then a sadist that likes to slap anyone who mentions her sister to her which is extremely ****ed to be honest as a normal human much less a man wouldn’t fucking stand by if someone slapped him for no reason but you made the mc not only not rebuke her but also just apologize to her and hug her to make her feel all better..... that made quite angry. Huff i don’t want to be too harsh to a budding writer since I understand that you’re doing you best and for that i commend you but i just shared with you what i felt from the first 40 chapters and so this would be extremely good feedback to you. I lost all desire to continue after he hugged her when she slapped him like who the **** does that? Anyway hope you all the best.