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2019-10-08 19:58

When i first read it i just got interested in it at first i kinda like s FL but i dont know if this is the way the author protrade the FL character but hey i just reading it. But if your gonna ask me honest critic the FL suck.come on your young ***** i dont know what county the author came from or how the age supposed to act but as for me the FL act like she got a brain damage.inosent nah i dont think so s****d yes. So if that the author wants the FL character good job because it will p**s you.

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Ikr, that's not even innocent! Even a 10yr old is smarter than that

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