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Tonukurio
TonukurioLv155yrTonukurio

Lacks editing and content. Quite a few spelling errors. Has a reasonable 'voice', but under-developed and really needs good editing. Reads like a 'pantser' story (story written on the fly by the pants of the seat). Has potential. Interested to see what happens next, but not sure if I'll be able to stand the voice style as it is now.

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married to the ancient prince

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