Review Detail of Eseru79 in The Wealthy Psychic Lady: 99 Stolen Kisses

The plot may have been good, but It was wasted here. The way the characters were presented was very disappointing. Grammar-wise, it's good, there are many witty lines as well, (made me think I was sipping soup with nothing but water and MSG) but over-all, the story development really left a bitter aftertaste that I finally had to drop it at Chapter 66. I was kind of hoping it would get better if I held on to reading but that chapter really put me off, sorry.