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sache
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From what I glean of the first 17 chapters, this is really quite terrible. The writing style is jarring. Things jump all over the place and there’s no context to actions. We aren’t give much insight into the thoughts of characters so we basically don’t know them. The events in the story so far happen with an ease that seems unrealistic. I was really looking forward to this. It had an interesting and unique plot summary. There was potential to do so much more.

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The Wealthy Psychic Lady: 99 Stolen Kisses

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Wudai293
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Agreed!

TangTangsKidnaping
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Read ahead it gets explosively better

TangTangsKidnaping
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Read ahead it gets explosively better

sache
sacheLv5sache

Is that plot wise or writing style wise?

TangTangsKidnaping:Read ahead it gets explosively better
TangTangsKidnaping
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Plot wise

TangTangsKidnaping
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But at present the guy is an asshile

TangTangsKidnaping
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Jerk

TangTangsKidnaping
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Idiot who doesn't deserve her. It'll be really painful to reach day first though. But it gets a lotta better. Spoiler. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . Second hubby not ML.

TangTangsKidnaping
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Idiot who doesn't deserve her. It'll be really painful to reach day first though. But it gets a lotta better. Spoiler. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . Second hubby not ML.

TangTangsKidnaping
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Idiot who doesn't deserve her. It'll be really painful to reach day first though. But it gets a lotta better. Spoiler. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . Second hubby not ML.

TangTangsKidnaping
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Idiot who doesn't deserve her. It'll be really painful to reach day first though. But it gets a lotta better. Spoiler. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . Second hubby not ML.

sache
sacheLv5sache

Woah !! Ok. Did not expect that. You reading raws right? How far in are you?

TangTangsKidnaping:Idiot who doesn't deserve her. It'll be really painful to reach day first though. But it gets a lotta better. Spoiler. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . Second hubby not ML.
TangTangsKidnaping
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Well and that not read till she divorcces again and got to know if him not being ml in spoiler