Review Detail of Anya_Nesh in The Last Embrace

Vampires.. Many people dream about being bitten by a vampire..But what if it is impossible for the last one. I really liked the idea of the story. Usually we read about how it's dangerous for humans to be bitten, but here, we met a situation when it's lethal for a vampire himself. The plot is very interesting and addictive. As for the stars. Writing quality. I put four stars. As it was mentioned in other reviews, the author really needs to check writing. Because there are a lot of pronoun and tense errors. But I'm not a native English myself and I know how it's hard to write in a foreing languge. So I'm sure that the author will improve her writing skills. Stability of Updates. Five stars. Of course, readers prefer daily updates, but a chapter every 3 days is ok for me. Story Development. Five stars. I liked it. Character Desigh. Four stars. Hmm, then I was reading it was a big contrast in MCs behaviour before and after the confession. They seemed like children for me before it, and then, in a flash they are like adults. It would be more natural if they were 17 y.o, but not 15 y.o. But it's only my opinion. World Background. Five stars. No questions. Everything is fine. To sum up, I got pleasure reading this novel. And I'm intrigued to know how the author will introduce us Adam's brother, what kind of character he will be. So please, keep writing! You need to finish your story!! As for grammar errors - just be more attentive, but don't let them distract you. And everything will be great!! Good luck!