Welp!! This is a fantastic novel, if I say so, author. Leaving, the minor mistakes it's all good to go. Just wondering why u made avolune for each chapter tho. I can see the usefulness of it, as I'm a writer myself but it's weird. Other than that, it feels very much like a Hollywood movie about vampires. Good job and best of luck!!
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LIKELizabelle88:It will be adapted in to a Hollywood movie soon, or pick up by Netflix, hahaha, just kidding bro!