Review Detail of Vorie in The Last Embrace

It's a cute story. I like it. I like the vampire vaccine it's not something I've personally read of before when reading vampire stories. I think it's very unique! I thought it was pretty crafty of him when he was checking her out in chapter 7 and when she asked him he was like, "I'm just looking at your pretty roses." LOL!!! I think there are a few grammar errors here and there but overall it's good. With more work and practice I'm sure it'll turn into a really good story.