Review Detail of ProfessorNoob in Douluo Dalu: Legend of Xiao Yan(Hiatus)
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WQ-5 SD-2 CD-3 US-4 WB-5 It was good until his future self and the Dragon appeared , once he starts talking to them it will eat 1 - 2 chapters. Making the progress of the story slower and so many nonsense in their interactions, at first it was funny but using it too much will make it irritating.
Douluo Dalu: Legend of Xiao Yan(Hiatus)
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Thank you for your review and I'll admit, I share the same thoughts as you. I started this story out of wanting to improve on my writing and was curious if this story of mine would get attention. I had the beginning and the end clear in my head but the middle parts was just all blank and I just wrote whatever comes to mind to fill it in. Anyways, I hope you enjoy the story further!