Review Detail of redstorm321 in Douluo Dalu: Legend of Xiao Yan(Hiatus)

Despite some mistakes in grammar, the author is doing a good job so far and has added quite a few moments that are comedy gold. The story is interesting in my opinion after a reading several chapters first and the character design for the MC is good. All in all a good story that doesn't make the reader question their eyesight. Keep it up.