Review Detail of Psan in Douluo Dalu: Legend of Xiao Yan(Hiatus)
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Honestly, this under is a hidden gem, its severly underrated and deserve to be within the top 20 at least. Some advertisement is needed to boost readers. The english is above average and the person tries to writes correctly with little mistakes. Also the summary needs to be fixed, the disclaimers are fine but you need to add that while you can take a bad rating, but must state WHY and not just say that they didnt liked it. its really bad and turn off readers having a bad summary. It barely explains anything about the story. Also the MC having the same name as xiao yan is confusing. Now onto the story? its really good, i just wish there were more world building and character and background details as for those who dont know the 2 novels you took for fanfic, nobody will understand whats going on and thats BAD. I also didnt liked that you skipped the climax of the fight between MC and the fire girl.
Douluo Dalu: Legend of Xiao Yan(Hiatus)
FroztDouluo
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Thank you for your constructive criticism! I understand that I have a lot of mistakes, I will change the summary soon, and I will say that in the near future, probably during the five year timeskip of DD, I would hiatus this story for a while to rewrite the mistakes that I have done. About the world building and etc, yeah... I should have also put in: pls read BTTH and Douluo Dalu before reading it. Thank you for the review of the story!
hiatus?!?.... fuk... make it as short as you can. i recommen you read "the book of authors" in webnovel. its a 26 chapter long guide for writing and tips
FroztDouluo:Thank you for your constructive criticism! I understand that I have a lot of mistakes, I will change the summary soon, and I will say that in the near future, probably during the five year timeskip of DD, I would hiatus this story for a while to rewrite the mistakes that I have done. About the world building and etc, yeah... I should have also put in: pls read BTTH and Douluo Dalu before reading it. Thank you for the review of the story!
It would be an entire week, before I'll make it go hiatus I'll probably drop a mass release(probs be 3-4chaps) to satisfy the readers for my abrupt hiatus for a rewrite
Psan:hiatus?!?.... fuk... make it as short as you can. i recommen you read "the book of authors" in webnovel. its a 26 chapter long guide for writing and tips
It would be an entire week, before I'll make it go hiatus I'll probably drop a mass release(probs be 3-4chaps) to satisfy the readers for my abrupt hiatus for a rewrite
Psan:hiatus?!?.... fuk... make it as short as you can. i recommen you read "the book of authors" in webnovel. its a 26 chapter long guide for writing and tips
i can handle a week. but be sure to make a notice. also if there are delays make a notice too. and again i recommenf you read the book of authors. it will improve your writing 😎
FroztDouluo:Thank you for your constructive criticism! I understand that I have a lot of mistakes, I will change the summary soon, and I will say that in the near future, probably during the five year timeskip of DD, I would hiatus this story for a while to rewrite the mistakes that I have done. About the world building and etc, yeah... I should have also put in: pls read BTTH and Douluo Dalu before reading it. Thank you for the review of the story!