Review Detail of SunScar9 in Fate or Destiny? Which One Is It!?

I am interested in the two-part story you wrote recently. I like the idea of a one-shot compilation, but I also think that you should try to make the stories more detailed and longer. Not going to comment on the grammar (though you do need to work on that) but definitely will encourage you to keep writing and get better. Really liked that you kept aside a chapter to give the readers a description of the characters. Thanks.