Review Detail of Mochimochipuffs in Reincarnated into a Hell Hound - BL/Yaoi

Item: Reincarnated into a Hell Hound - BL/Yaoi
Rating: 4.2

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MochimochipuffsLv24yrMochimochipuffs

Hey, so... um.... you really, really need an editor. yeah, that's about it. It's pretty good story wise though, with enough realism to keep me interested

Reincarnated into a Hell Hound - BL/Yaoi

VCris

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VCrisAuthorVCris

Thanks hon, yeah, the beginning is a little fuzzy, to say the least, but it gets better later on (as I get used to writing in English) Hope you still give it a chance :D

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