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Eir_riE
Eir_riELv116yr
2019-02-22 00:15

First of all I have to say that I love this story very much. I like how the story isn't fast paced and takes time to go in depth into the characters thought process as well as detail their growth as the characters progress through different hardships and adventures. The style of writing is easy to follow and read through without it being overly simplistic. The world building is steady and increases as the storyline goes further into the characters which i think is great in itself. I especially like how descriptive the author is off the scenery. Such as the dungeon and how it is spatially defined. It gives your imagination more room to imagine and create a picture in your head of what goes where and how it connects. Thank you for the hard work and I hope you continue this story till its end.

Reincarnated into a Hell Hound - BL/Yaoi

VCris
4.6
155 Chs

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VCris
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Thank You very much!!! Hope you keep enjoying it ;D

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XiaXiaLake
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Great review!

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I love this story! It's unique in its own way as the protagonist is like the ones from Japanese novels(the status screens), but also like the ones in Chinese novels(where they reincarnate or transform into animals). The author's writing style is to the point and the only thing I'd request of them is to look over her spelling once in a while! 😂 But besides that, the plot's at a nice pace and the different point of views are a plus to the whole story! Dear author, thank you for putting up your story online! I know it's kind of scary at first since you think you'll be judged or scorned by the readers, (well, at least I was) but you're doing a great job! And I'm saying this as a fellow BL author! Keep up the good work!

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VCris
VCrisAuthor

Hey!! Author here to let you know that the continuation of the series Reincarnated into a... is finally out!! ヾ(ﾟ∀ﾟゞ) Feel free to check it out! 〜(꒪꒳꒪;)〜 *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* Reincarnated into a Snow Griffin - BL/Yaoi *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

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I love this story! There are quite a few spelling errors, but I am more than happy to overlook that simply because it's such an amazing story!! Can't wait to see what the author has in store for us next! ❤️❤️

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There's a few misspellings, but they don't hinder the reading. The MC is funny, interesting, and lovely. I particularly love the dumb brother - is just too cute and I want to pet him all the time. The mindset of the characters evolves along the story, and the world is also interesting and well portrayed. Overall, it's a good read and I recommend it (if you love BL of course!)(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

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Although I read this book on a different website I still want to appreciate the author! (*´꒳`*) Really cute story and I can’t help squeal when MC and ML are around each other!

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Great character development. I love how it starts out slow and really builds the brothers relationships. It is very sweet and makes me want to keep reading. I cannot wait to see where the story goes in the future.

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