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Sepher1
Sepher1Lv114yrSepher1

Not only is this an awesome story with good character development and world-building, it is even SO good that I would gladly pay Spirit Stones to have read it. But guess what, it is free! All hail the mighty Author! Having just finished reading this Novel a second time, I am still impressed how the Author handled all the pitfalls one usually writes himself into, and the Author sometimes makes fun of them (like MC ignoring the villains speech of the Arch-Demon and instantly attacks, not giving them any chance to counter him). One of the most dangerous problems that might have come up with the story was the extreme power creep of our mighty MC, especially after the Time-Skip chapter. The Author made such a long list of all his Skills and Spells that it could only be summarized as "we get hit, he can do everything now". But not only was he not the most powerful at a fundamental level (Rune-"Mastery", no Divinity, still not having access to META, SOUL and TIME), even with all his powers, he still encountered a lot of problems that he could not fix besides his power, like healing / reviving is mother because of her MAGIC NULL. To the Author: It was such a joy to read your Novel, thank you. P.S.: You could fault the Novel that there were no real consequences of people getting hurt or dying, because they could just be brought back later, or with the help of gods, lessening the drama significantly. For example the Marvel Cinematic Universe gets this critic a lot recently. For me, it made this Novel a good Light Novel that I wanted to enjoy. Personally, I did want to read something light hearted without too much of the dark themes, which made this Novel perfect. You should also consider that many of the long Chinese Novels, especially Wuxia, Xianxia and Xuanhuan, which can go on for thousands of chapters, usually end by the MC becoming the Arch-Over-Multirealm-Supergod and bringing everyone back to life that was important to the MC. Most usually the MC's wife that died in the first or second realm. PPS: One absolute valid critique to the Author for not using the pun of addressing Joseph as "Your Mage-esty" by Stella or one of his followers :D

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Sepher1
Sepher1Lv11Sepher1

Another thank you to the Author for tying up all loose ends in the middle and end of the story. I can't imagine how hard it must've been to keep track of all the character development besides of the people besides the MC. Good job.

Kris_Watson
Kris_WatsonLv6Kris_Watson

the author did mention all the people who killed and resurrected were required to get counciling and Joseph was terribly bothered by it every time his people were attacked but she didn't dwell on it for chapters of sad pitiful poor me reflection like some books do.

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Thank you!