Review Detail of DarkEvangeli in Abuse of Magic
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Disappointed at ch27 when he gave the system to a slave girl and then couple chapter later also becomes more capable than mc. I really liked how the mc was training and becoming more capable but then only to be overshadowed by someone who just recieved it. It made his progress quite meaningless in my eyes.
Abuse of Magic
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I have a lot of readers who don't like this aspect of my story, and I'm sorry you feel this prohibits you from continuing the story. This is the only story that I have ever written that had a system, and I have never read a story that really had a system prior to writing this one. The girl is not a slave, but she is a servant, and she is intended as a secondary character to the story. Thank you for your thoughts.
its a classic case of linear warriors vs quadratic wizards. keep reading. Joseph is way more powerful than Stella later and in fact her power is heavily influenced by his gifts. Also this world has a number of people with the system. making an ally with the system isn't a bad thing. And last the writing quality is at least 4 or 5 and the stability of updates is every day except a few times so another 4 or 5 stars. it should be impossible to rate this 1 star even if you hate the rest.