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VaderTheHutt
VaderTheHuttLv55yrVaderTheHutt

The story is about a boy who receives a system from his father on his 7th birthday. The system is not as OP as the norm is, which under normal circumstances would have been a turn off for me, however, the author has done a splendid job of keeping the system real. The system prompts and levelling up is not as easy as the norm is. The unique thing about this system is that it's introduction and explanation is much much more systematic than many other novels. In fact at one point the system appreciates the MC who is not using the system to form mindless harems like it's previous hosts. Also characters are deep. The female lead's background story is really deep. Also the relationship between MC and heroine is really beautiful. The MC and heroine care for each other a lot, but have a relationship which is befitting more of best friends. The writing is beautiful and of the highest quality. Overall it's a beautiful read. The story is very well written and powers are explained amazingly. I recommend this novel if you are searching for a good and long time read.

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Thank you!

certainDaoist
certainDaoistLv5certainDaoist

Damn, this review is so through and through, the reviewer in few words, defined the novel down to the base. This is what a real review must look like, and while reading the novel, at least am at ease knowing the story won't go down hell, in the middle and continue with an entire flavor, plus this days I badly tolerate harem tags due to its over used and exhausted state, right now almost and I repeat almost the new stories with harem tag serves as a way for thier authors, to vent their sexual frustrations and express the inner pervert hidden normaly deep down inside them, so deep that they can't afford to let out in real life,*sigh*. Also normally harem stories should be tged under romance but with current situation, it will just Sully the fine works there. Thanks again for both the author of this story and the reviewer.

VaderTheHutt
VaderTheHuttLv5VaderTheHutt

Thanks man ! 😊

certainDaoist:Damn, this review is so through and through, the reviewer in few words, defined the novel down to the base. This is what a real review must look like, and while reading the novel, at least am at ease knowing the story won't go down hell, in the middle and continue with an entire flavor, plus this days I badly tolerate harem tags due to its over used and exhausted state, right now almost and I repeat almost the new stories with harem tag serves as a way for thier authors, to vent their sexual frustrations and express the inner pervert hidden normaly deep down inside them, so deep that they can't afford to let out in real life,*sigh*. Also normally harem stories should be tged under romance but with current situation, it will just Sully the fine works there. Thanks again for both the author of this story and the reviewer.
VaderTheHutt
VaderTheHuttLv5VaderTheHutt

I have the same opinion as you towards the harem tag. Most of the novels having harem tag fail to show romance and just become a showcase of list and fan service. It is extremely annoying to see such novels up in the rankings. I wish that the top original novels here had the quality of some royalroad legends. And also your feedback on my review made me feel really good, as attracting readers to this novel while showcasing it's points was my main goal. Thanks a lot for taking your time to write so much. It made my day. 😊

certainDaoist:Damn, this review is so through and through, the reviewer in few words, defined the novel down to the base. This is what a real review must look like, and while reading the novel, at least am at ease knowing the story won't go down hell, in the middle and continue with an entire flavor, plus this days I badly tolerate harem tags due to its over used and exhausted state, right now almost and I repeat almost the new stories with harem tag serves as a way for thier authors, to vent their sexual frustrations and express the inner pervert hidden normaly deep down inside them, so deep that they can't afford to let out in real life,*sigh*. Also normally harem stories should be tged under romance but with current situation, it will just Sully the fine works there. Thanks again for both the author of this story and the reviewer.
certainDaoist
certainDaoistLv5certainDaoist

Don't thank me, thank the original reviewer, its because of him I decided to read the novel, this cone from a habit as synopsis could be misleading sometimes. That's way in addition to reading the synopsis, I would also read the reviews then followed with 2 chapters in the novel, which got me hooked on, thanks for the quality and hope you continue on, you might just inspire another author for thier novel or make someone's reading time worth it and happy.

VaderTheHutt:I have the same opinion as you towards the harem tag. Most of the novels having harem tag fail to show romance and just become a showcase of list and fan service. It is extremely annoying to see such novels up in the rankings. I wish that the top original novels here had the quality of some royalroad legends. And also your feedback on my review made me feel really good, as attracting readers to this novel while showcasing it's points was my main goal. Thanks a lot for taking your time to write so much. It made my day. 😊
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6Shadewind

Is it gay novel......? Cause I just saw gay tag.

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SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

No, I don't know why it has that, and don't know how to remove it either.

Shadewind:Is it gay novel......? Cause I just saw gay tag.
Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

I'm not sure why I have a gay or a harem tag. Neither is appropriate for this story, and there's no way to remove them, as far as I know.

certainDaoist:Damn, this review is so through and through, the reviewer in few words, defined the novel down to the base. This is what a real review must look like, and while reading the novel, at least am at ease knowing the story won't go down hell, in the middle and continue with an entire flavor, plus this days I badly tolerate harem tags due to its over used and exhausted state, right now almost and I repeat almost the new stories with harem tag serves as a way for thier authors, to vent their sexual frustrations and express the inner pervert hidden normaly deep down inside them, so deep that they can't afford to let out in real life,*sigh*. Also normally harem stories should be tged under romance but with current situation, it will just Sully the fine works there. Thanks again for both the author of this story and the reviewer.
Kris_Watson
Kris_WatsonLv6Kris_Watson

5 people add the tag to the novel not the author. as of chapter 120 i haven't seen any homosexuality. the main character is 7 so other than some really dark back story along with the female lead also having a dark back story their has been no mention of sex at all though hetero or homo. at one point there is a side character who is falsely accused of rape but that is cleared up in the same chapter. the story is about good friends and magic in a really terrible screwed up world.

Shadewind:Is it gay novel......? Cause I just saw gay tag.
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6Shadewind

So does the female lead get raped. ......?

Kris_Watson:5 people add the tag to the novel not the author. as of chapter 120 i haven't seen any homosexuality. the main character is 7 so other than some really dark back story along with the female lead also having a dark back story their has been no mention of sex at all though hetero or homo. at one point there is a side character who is falsely accused of rape but that is cleared up in the same chapter. the story is about good friends and magic in a really terrible screwed up world.
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No, she was raised by a mother who brought home men each evening for money, a whore, and when those men were done with her mother, they would come seeking her. She never got raped, but she experienced enough attempts that she has a lot of issues with events with the mc, despite her age and his age. She is not sheltered and has a much higher mentality then her age would attest to before receiving the system. I know a lot of people have issues with the dark aspects of my story, and I honestly did not anticipate that. I did make sure the titles warned of the upcoming chapters' dark aspect. My intent was to convey that the world they live in is very dark and gritty, not all roses as other stories often are. I was attempting to form a relationship between the two characters that was deeper than normal, and that would grow throughout the story into something that could not be broken.

Shadewind:So does the female lead get raped. ......?
Shadewind
ShadewindLv6Shadewind

Thanks . I will give it a try after finishing the current one . Even the story is dark as long as the mc gf doesn't get rape or ntr I am good with it .

Sdrawkcab:No, she was raised by a mother who brought home men each evening for money, a whore, and when those men were done with her mother, they would come seeking her. She never got raped, but she experienced enough attempts that she has a lot of issues with events with the mc, despite her age and his age. She is not sheltered and has a much higher mentality then her age would attest to before receiving the system. I know a lot of people have issues with the dark aspects of my story, and I honestly did not anticipate that. I did make sure the titles warned of the upcoming chapters' dark aspect. My intent was to convey that the world they live in is very dark and gritty, not all roses as other stories often are. I was attempting to form a relationship between the two characters that was deeper than normal, and that would grow throughout the story into something that could not be broken.
Kris_Watson
Kris_WatsonLv6Kris_Watson

the chance of NTR in this novel is practically nothing. not a spoiler so don't worry about it. the chance they both stay celebate is higher than someone stealing the FL at this point i would say.

Shadewind:Thanks . I will give it a try after finishing the current one . Even the story is dark as long as the mc gf doesn't get rape or ntr I am good with it .
ipanchu
ipanchuLv4ipanchu

We should be the ones thanking you.

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SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

Lol I appreciate that 😊

ipanchu:We should be the ones thanking you.
SaltyHalaman03
SaltyHalaman03Lv5SaltyHalaman03

can I ask because I sae the harem tag but this novel, is it really harem?

SaltyHalaman03
SaltyHalaman03Lv5SaltyHalaman03

can I ask because I sae the harem tag but this novel, is it really harem?

SaltyHalaman03
SaltyHalaman03Lv5SaltyHalaman03

can I ask because I sae the harem tag but this novel, is it really harem?

SaltyHalaman03
SaltyHalaman03Lv5SaltyHalaman03

can I ask because I sae the harem tag but this novel, is it really harem?

VaderTheHutt
VaderTheHuttLv5VaderTheHutt

Nah. It's not a harem.

SaltyHalaman03:can I ask because I sae the harem tag but this novel, is it really harem?