As the author: this story is my first attempt at a system story. It moves a little slower than I care for, but has a very well thought out world, characters and plot. The reader follows Joseph as he learns magic at an obsessive level, while dealing with drama from his only friend Stella, and his father who is a slave Master. The world throws curve balls at him, to derail his carefully detailed plans. But he will eventually persevere and become the Mage King.
Sdrawkcab
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LIKESdrawkcab:It is not romantic or harem. Joseph learns magic and becomes awesome.
When I first made this review, I was unsure on how to write a story with a system element. I have not really read a lot of stories with a system to base my own concepts off of. As I have written more of this story, my confidence has risen, but I feel that all authors have room for improvement. Whether people read my story or not, should be based off of what they want, not just me trying to shove it down their throats. I appreciate your comments and concerns.
Pannath:When the author writes a review for his own work in progress and doesn't give himself full stars... Doesn't a higher star rating help attract readers who haven't read it yet?
Pannath:When the author writes a review for his own work in progress and doesn't give himself full stars... Doesn't a higher star rating help attract readers who haven't read it yet?
I am on discord, it's Sdrawkcab server. Not many people are on it, if you join, you may be the only one other than me lol
Devilcore:i find this story amazing i want to thank you for writing it , i love the system actually having a personality i love the hard work the mc puts in learning things .im all caught up and just loving every day i check to see a new chapter i highly recommend this story. i just wish you had a discord
Sdrawkcab:I am on discord, it's Sdrawkcab server. Not many people are on it, if you join, you may be the only one other than me lol
Devilcore:just letting you know without the number behind discord wont let you add iv tried Sdrawkcab T-T
GraniteGrizz:I can't wait for your next work. Thank you for Joseph and Stella!