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Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthor5yrSdrawkcab

As the author: this story is my first attempt at a system story. It moves a little slower than I care for, but has a very well thought out world, characters and plot. The reader follows Joseph as he learns magic at an obsessive level, while dealing with drama from his only friend Stella, and his father who is a slave Master. The world throws curve balls at him, to derail his carefully detailed plans. But he will eventually persevere and become the Mage King.

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Abuse of Magic

Sdrawkcab

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DaoistZoid
DaoistZoidLv15DaoistZoid

Romance, harem or something?

Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

It is not romantic or harem. Joseph learns magic and becomes awesome.

Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

It is not romantic or harem. Joseph learns magic and becomes awesome.

DaoistZoid:Romance, harem or something?
SoberanoSinNombre
SoberanoSinNombreLv5SoberanoSinNombre

The tags say gay and romance. This is yaoi ? 🤢

Sdrawkcab:It is not romantic or harem. Joseph learns magic and becomes awesome.
Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

No. I do not know why I have these tags. I don't know how to remove them either.

SoberanoSinNombre:The tags say gay and romance. This is yaoi ? 🤢
Pannath
PannathLv13Pannath

When the author writes a review for his own work in progress and doesn't give himself full stars... Doesn't a higher star rating help attract readers who haven't read it yet?

Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

When I first made this review, I was unsure on how to write a story with a system element. I have not really read a lot of stories with a system to base my own concepts off of. As I have written more of this story, my confidence has risen, but I feel that all authors have room for improvement. Whether people read my story or not, should be based off of what they want, not just me trying to shove it down their throats. I appreciate your comments and concerns.

Pannath:When the author writes a review for his own work in progress and doesn't give himself full stars... Doesn't a higher star rating help attract readers who haven't read it yet?
senkii
senkiiLv6senkii

like

Pannath:When the author writes a review for his own work in progress and doesn't give himself full stars... Doesn't a higher star rating help attract readers who haven't read it yet?
Devilcore
DevilcoreLv4Devilcore

i find this story amazing i want to thank you for writing it , i love the system actually having a personality i love the hard work the mc puts in learning things .im all caught up and just loving every day i check to see a new chapter i highly recommend this story. i just wish you had a discord

Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

I am on discord, it's Sdrawkcab server. Not many people are on it, if you join, you may be the only one other than me lol

Devilcore:i find this story amazing i want to thank you for writing it , i love the system actually having a personality i love the hard work the mc puts in learning things .im all caught up and just loving every day i check to see a new chapter i highly recommend this story. i just wish you had a discord
Devilcore
DevilcoreLv4Devilcore

do you have a link posted somewhere?

Sdrawkcab:I am on discord, it's Sdrawkcab server. Not many people are on it, if you join, you may be the only one other than me lol
Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

Not really. I should probably do that. Thanks 😊

Devilcore:do you have a link posted somewhere?
Devilcore
DevilcoreLv4Devilcore

now im excited :D

Sdrawkcab:Not really. I should probably do that. Thanks 😊
Devilcore
DevilcoreLv4Devilcore

just letting you know without the number behind discord wont let you add iv tried Sdrawkcab T-T

Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

Thanks! I'll fix that.

Devilcore:just letting you know without the number behind discord wont let you add iv tried Sdrawkcab T-T
dwvande
dwvandeLv14dwvande

I have to ask- is your name an allusion to Piers Anthony?

Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

No, but my husband and one of my three boys loves his work.

dwvande:I have to ask- is your name an allusion to Piers Anthony?
GraniteGrizz
GraniteGrizzLv14GraniteGrizz

I can't wait for your next work. Thank you for Joseph and Stella!

Sdrawkcab
SdrawkcabAuthorSdrawkcab

You are very welcome! Thank you for reading!

GraniteGrizz:I can't wait for your next work. Thank you for Joseph and Stella!
Reader_Harris
Reader_HarrisLv10Reader_Harris

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